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סיפור דמות | Chris Carter

Chris Carter Life`s Story
English Version

Chris was born in Canada 1982 , to Sophia and Lucas Carter
Chris always dreamt to be police officer, and waited for the right time to try to get accepted
When chris was 18 , he joined the army and killed many terrorists
He even once did not complain on anything , when he finished the army , he tried to get accepted in the canada police department , and he graduated on the first time
Chris was happy , because of his new job , Not because of the money , because he allways wanted this.
He was so good in this job that the even the chief there was proud of him
Until the chief invited him to his room
The Chief : Hello Chris, Do you know why i've invited you to my room?
Chris : No sir, Why?
The Chief : Chris , how much time you are in this work?
Chris : Month and half sir
The Chief : Do you know , you are the best officer in this department ,I really proud of you i really am , I want you to be Sergeant , i know its too fast , but ,Our sergeant exempts , he took bribe tarry , And I think that you need to receive this role
*Chris Raises little Smile *
Chris : Thank you sir
The Chief : Take care of our officers chris , and please , dont let me down
Chris : Sir , I wont let you down
Chris was so excited , He knew how to take care of the crime
after half a year he went to the chief`s room
The chief : Something new Chris?
Chris : Sir , I am leaving the police
** The Chief Raises an eyebroew **
The Chief : What the heck ? Chris ? Why
Chris : Sir , I feel that I need to leave, I am working too much in this work
See , I love this work very much , I love to arrest criminals , but I am moving to Los santos , I think i will have a better life there
The Chief : Chris , you know I want you to stay , but I cant make you stay
** Chris takes his badge and puts it on the table **
Chirs : Thank you for a great time
-end of part one-

Chris carter moved to los santos , he was unhappy to leave canada
and he tought that his dream just exploded, so he started a new life here in los santos
he met a pretty girl , and started to dating her ,
he had a good life , and bought a beautiful house in Idlewood
after 2 months someone tried to rob him , but chris didnt want to pay him
This guy was a tough guy, he told him just one thing , I will be back
Chris was affriad but he forgot it after a month
after two months the same guy kidnapped his girl friend
Chris didnt know what to do , he just wanted his girl friend back , but he could not do nothing
after a day
* Chris phone rings *
Chris : Hello?
Unknown guy : Hello chris
Chris : Hello , who are you
Unknown guy : Listen me carefully , if you want your girl friend come to glen park 8 pm alone
Chris : Listen to me motherfuck..e
* The phone disconnected *
Chris was worried about his girl friend
So he came to glen park in 8 pm
* Chris notices a black van is coming *
* Unknown guy comes out from the vehicle with a silenced pistol *
* Unknown guy aims at Chris *
* Unknown guy shouts *
Unknown guy : Put your hands up
* Chris raises his hands up *
Unknown guy : Come to me , but do not put your hands down
* Chris goes across Unknown guy *
* Unknown guy frisks Chris and found nothing *
Unknown guy : Get in the fucking vehicle
* Unknown guy pushes him into the vehicle *
Chris : Ok Do not push me
They took him to unknown place , and there he met his girl friend
Sara : Chris!
Chris : Sara! , do not worry , im going to help you out
Unknown guy : So.. Romantic
* Unknown guy laughs *
Unknown guy : Do you remember the first day we met?
* Chris nods *
Unknown guy : You did a mistake , you didnt give me your wallet , now i have to take your
life
* Scared Voice *
Chris : Please dont , take everthing , please leave us alone
Unknown guy : You dont have something i need
Chris : Money?
Unknown guy : How much money do you offer?
Chris : I dont know , 100 thousand?
Unknown guy : Looks like a great deal , now listen to me carefully
I will let you go now , i want you tommrow at glen park same time , with a case with all the money , you got it ? if you dont gonne be there , forget about your girl friend
Chris : i .. i will be there
** Chris took 100 thousand from the bank **
Chris could not sleep , because his toughts of his girl friend killed him
** the day after chris took the case with the money and went to glen park **
The same unknown guy took chris to the same place to see sara
** Chris opens the case and shows him 100 thousand **
** The Unknown guy closes the case , takes his Silenced Pistol and aims at sara **
** Chris with a scared face raises an eyebrow**
Chris : Wait!! we had a deal! please dont
Unknown guy : Yeah , we had , you did a mistake you didnt give me your wallet at the first time , you have luck you alive
** Unknown guy shoots sara **
** Sara dies **
Chris : NOOOO!!!
** Unknown guy left the place with the black van**
Chris was so angry , and he wanted to revenge
-end of part two-

Chris is still angry about his girl friend , he knew that killing people would not help , he just wanted to stop this violence , so just one idea came up to his mind " To try to join the police department again "
Chris succeded to join , but hes still in the academy
Chris is a responsible person who cares about justice
He have seen two people fighting , he tried to seperate
** Chris looks at the two people that fighting **
Chris : Hey stop
Unknown voice : shut the fuck up
Chris: stop it !
** Chris tries to push the guy to the ground **
Chris : I dont want problems , here take
** Chris takes his wallet and grabs 50 bux **
** Chris hands it to the unknown guy **
Chris : Here you go , now please leave
Unknown guy : Hey ,t h..ank you
Chris : Its alright , do you need an ambulance?
Unknown guy : No , im fine, i will go now
Chris : I hope youll be ok
Chris knew , thats not about the " thank you " thing , its about the peace thing , Chris hopes to graduate the police academy
Chris is a good man , he know how to take care of the crime , He couldnt pay to his house owner , so he kicked him out
Chris is still trying to find a good house , and he knews that is going to continue his dream


Name: Chris Carter
Sex : Male
Birthdate : 1982
Age: 26
Birthplace : USA , Canada
Religion:
Height: 183m
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color : Black
Eye Color : Green
Occupation: N/A
Previous Occupation : Ex-Officer
Criminal Record : N/A
Languages : English
Previous Medical History : N/A
Scars/Tattoos: N/A
Education: College graduate
Married : No
Dating : No
Pictures : soon
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אחלה השקעה..
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