The Story Of Nacho!

Personal Details

First Name : Nacho

Last Name : Demariko

Date : 12.12.1984

NickName : Loco

Number identity card : 32154480

Nation : Spanish ,Mexican

Belief : Jewish

Weight : 80 K'G

Height : 1.84

Sex : Male

Dewlling place : San Fierro , Pier 88

Hair color : Black

Eye color : Black

Criminal Record : A Theft of cars , Robbing , Murder

Jails : I was caught twice


This idea^ ^copied off Solo

Let's begin

Part 1 - 12\12\1984

Today in which I was born there was so/now/here pleases for my parents they so was happy and they made big party. After kickeds my mother died from disease, my father to the take me to the tests because I was born to the sick mother of the doctors said that I don't have anything he so happy but yet there was sad due to my mother he so loved her called her may she was happiness not there was in her a drop of sadness all my girls grew with my father and with the brothers of the twin sancho that was born together with me we were all the time together and we grew together Bbtspr we were dominators on all of them and all them used to/would listen us we were live mixed Santos and wanted to establish a gang of several friends and to start to control


Part 2 - 12\12\1997

I and brothers of my boy 13 my father did us very big party with all the friends and with all the uncles and the aunts was

really fun in the end of the party of my father to the take us the house several streets before we arrived at the house I remember it was several streets encountered the gang of people that there were with Bndnot I remember this they said to my father will leave from the car take the children Oaopo map/from here/!! My father didn't want they withdrew the same in their force shot in him twice in the stomach I and my brother Bcino a great deal of my father said us to go the house to collect everything and to go to the grandmother of routine in Las Vegas

Of course the our attentiveness him and we did/made what he said us we went to the grandmother and she received us in temperature and in the class due to that age her ( my father ) dead.

Part 3 - 15\8\2002

When we were almost age eighteenth we didn't want to enlist to the army we billowed offenders
The army sought us a great deal of but did not find they even publicized him awareness on us since we commenced
To revolve with Bndnot in the brown color in order that not they will put a heart to us and not they will call the police or to the next army to seek us

Part 4 - 4\2\2005

In the age 20 approximately I received a conversation of telephone from my uncle brounu and his brother diago
They requested that we will arrive at Seine Fransisco put they dwell and to arrive at the apartment that/because they want to tell us something of course I and my brother packed everything and missed the apartment entered the apartment Htishbnopo and we spoke a little laughed
In the age 20 approximately I received a conversation of telephone from my uncle brounu and his brother diago

They requested that we will arrive at Seine Fransisco put they dwell and to arrive at the apartment that/because they want to tell us something of course I and my brother packed everything and missed the apartment entered the apartment Htishbnopo and we spoke a little laughed we drank and then when we came to go he said that he has organization that call him

La " 88th " hunda and he and his brother manage him and there is more organization that his name la " 69th " hunda he offered Shntstrp to his organization and I and my brother that always we wanted to establish a gang agreed he told us on everything that goes and what our role since my nickname he " loco " and to my brother call " polo"

Part 5 - 12\12\2009

Age 25 I and my brother in the organization that controls for/on-all San Fransisco became have respect of gold of great assets and many but much respect!

The End!


(Part of the words that struggled I was helped Morfix but the remainder I did alone.)

wow ! , good job ese' Remember Loco ! La' Hunda For Ever !

אור איזה סיפור אחי אחד המושקעים (הוא עבד על זה איזה שעתיים )

Thank's All

La Hunda For Ever! wow!!! good job ese' You Remember "Loco"

Good Job

	MaTaN_xdxd	ציטוט:
	אור איזה סיפור אחי אחד המושקעים (הוא עבד על זה איזה שעתיים )

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