Personal Details

First Name : Francisco

Last Name : Ortiz

Date : 25.4.1986

NickName : El'Loco

Number identity card : 2158305

Nation : Mexico , Mexico city

Belief : Christ follower

Weight : 71 K"G

Height : 1.87

Sex : Male

Dewlling place : San Fierro , Pier 69

Hair color : Shatni

Eye color : Blue

edge : No Have

Criminal Record : Murders , Robberies , Hijackings

Jails : unperceived

qualtiy :
Serious person which does not concede and obtains the target which be asked him, at all costs also if this says to sacrifice lived to death, not is not fear, is not from policemen, or doesn't matter/change who what. Funny sociable person, that not does nonsense in the instantaneous pressure, like for example from robbery.

Part 1 - 25/4/1986
In 1986, was born two twins, in the poor neighborhood in the city, san fierro, to the two parents that to their sorrow, did can't bring can't bring never/to the world/ there was different problems and after time that the mother to enter to the pregnancy, once second after the birth the first, Casualty come after that/because there is for, 3 children And hard her in their increase, that/because not they had much money eats both not, and his father worked all day, and their mother after learned to go in the age two Years and their brother that there was already age 5 fled from the house.

Part 2 -16/5/1990
He sought work, in the streets, is not old by the nights and after how much time arrived at the man which did not recognize he accesses a person and told him so : " Hello sir, I seek work you can help me? " The man answered him : " Boy you are little you do not think? " The boy answered him : " The situation of my parents (of) bad, and I want to help to them this is important me terrible! " Answer him the man : " to see me that I can help you, will be seen I have work for you " " you need to do what I say you, every thing. " Answer him the boy : " Yes sir " the boy was happy but not knew why he will enter, he was happy really to help for wants really to help for.

Part 3 - 20/2/1994
After arrived at the age, 15 he started by the little works like, a transfer of things, it's price in the grocery store that there was of Hadon his, after a short time the boy said to the Mister so : " Sir it's possible something more challenges?" Hadon told him : " Will be heard, just now I can't give you something else that will arrive at be leaven ready to the situation I will give you something more challenge will believe me " the boy went and continued to work, for food, money, and forgot from the house his parents worried, but thought Shibdo their boy, he did not return after a long time, he thought to return to his house if the money, but Hadon not agreed. The boy thought to himself/itself, what his targets? What does he wants from right? Why
he .

Part 4 - 13/6/1998
When Mrsl arrived at the age 18 he arrived at the Mister and asked the same question. " Sir, it's possible please something challenge " Hadon thought few minutes and answered him : " Will be heard a boy after time that I am a tower you at my place I want that will understand something that if I will insert you why that I do, you will not know how to go out who this, you yet think that you want something more challenge? " The boy Hana quickly yes! , Without thinking second, after told him yes man so him with him, and told him : " Will be heard just now you will enter never/to the world/ the crime you don't have through to return " " from now you nevermore sell in the grocery
store,receive a few more things ".

Part 5 - 10/9/2002
After time Shbgia to the age more adult of age 22, he sold drugs and his condition will improve, he wanted Litkdm in his work, worked double work who what he did previous, worked overtime, Hadon accesses to the boy. And told him so : " Boy, you need something? " The boy answered him so : " Yes, after 3 years that I sell in the drugs you can promote me something else? " Hadon answered him : " Will be heard I think a neighbor/since... " " You know to hold a weapon? " Answer the boy : " Not, Lngati in this even once the happy to try " after the boy answered happened/cold/ Hadon after from his people and whisper him in the ear : " Will teach him, everything that you know, UnderStand ?
The man answered : " Yes boss " the man taught him to hold a weapon, to adjust, to shoot everything everything everything! , The boy Ytlab who this, and started to go with them to the campaigns Liraot how this, and he Hhbin, that he endangers his life after, that received again advancement after 3 years of Mhirt drugs discovered both this to his brothers everything and if sold increasingly as Mias and more and more... Until that the boss said to them " and or will relax " they told him : " Boss we need to work then we work ", the boss asked them : " You need maybe which something? , Harasser you something? " We him : " Yes boss, we want to be if the friend Hz
We him : " Not, we enjoy with him, he sold with us drugs, there was with us in the grocery store always and helped then there is it's possible please boss? " Think several seconds and said : " I think that not Tihia problem... " The boss didn't know that two of the twins were brothers of Mrsl, the boss immediately called after from his soldiers that will teach them to hold a weapon every but everything everything that the soldier know.

Part 6 - 16/7/2005
After arrived at the age 25 he already is not a boy and his brothers age 22, he knew Aipo he will be found what happens with him, everything! He understood that he is in the world that not by rehearsal from our days, he thought what to do what to do.... In order to the mandrake who here/mouth, but fear from Mister and from his people, that will not kill him, thought to himself/itself " maybe I will kill Hadon theirs.. " , "Is not they will kill me ", " but maybe I will do this quietly " and so he thought and thought, he will be remembered that he sold drugs to the people of crime and he requested help from them and like that we/they gave him weapon, they arrived at the place about, 6 people, and after told this to his brothers. They wanted to be the matter and told him him : " We with you brothers of you do not go alone " and he answered to them : " I Mitstar I can not endanger your life " they told him : " Mitstarim here/mouth we will not listen! If you go we with you understand? " He answered to them : " Aoki will do what you want, I see that you don't understand " after he obtained a weapon him to his brothers and to the quite a few soldiers, they went to the place of the boss and murdered the same and his people.

Part 7 - 29/6/1997
After liquidated all of them, and the boss fled will be put and traveled to the city, san fierro and there recognized the gang that her name was, san fierro rifa and he Nihia one of the bosses put. He taught his people many, on the drugs of materials, weapon everything, and so today he Mitgorr there if his brother the tiwns.

((Enjoy , This is my old story, simple varied there, and also we now la ' " 69th " Hunda ))

מושקע, כול הכבוד.
רק חבל שאני לא מעוניין לקרוא את זה.. אל תעלב, לא משהו אישי :\

חח אף אחד לא באמת יקרא עד הסוף יפה דור אחלה השקעה

Good Job Dor.
((רק תערוך את ה El Loco כי זה הכינוי של כפיר והכינוי של זה Loco אז תערוך אחי))

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